Wonder #8
How do you know I'm hurting if you can't see my pain?
To wear it on my body tells words I cannot explain
Begone my screams of silence, harbingers of pain
Cloaked in isolation, you mock in harsh disdain
So wandering lost and lonely, afraid I'll always remain
I thought you'd always be by my side, but instead you've made my eyes rain
So turn away from my pain
Act like you don't see
Like an umbrella in the rain
Shield yourself from me
31 wonders:
kinda sad...but still a good poem
Heavy stuff.... You have a gift my friend :)
I love poetry! The ones that make me sad are always the best :)
Nice.... I have no word for that
Deep and somber...
I'm speechless, enjoyed!
Good Poem ! <3
Nice one! ;)
Good Blog.
Keep up the good work:)
awesome poem, touched my heart :D
Well, if you wrote this, then you have some talent. Really deep thoughts
poem not bad but i like more the pic =)
I enjoy reading poems like this one!
Thanks for sharing!
Everybody knows that feeling to be left alone.... but better times will always come :)
man.... so sad, and beautiful at the same time.
man, so sad... and beautiful at the same time
very eloquent poetry
Too bad sad poetry makes me feel worse that I already feelt, but I must admit thats piece of good art.
hard to show ones own sufferign and sadness when society expects you to be ok and happy, i for along time hid my sadness and it all built up till one day i had a breakdown, now i just tell peopel if im feeling sad and or annoyed and perhaps its harsh but it dont feel liek im hiding anything, i do take a positive stance and dont dwell on the bad feeling.. but peopel do know how i feel o.o :D great one
I liked it. Kinda. A bit to emo
Got to agree with the comment above... very stereotypical emo, but also quite clever, so pretty impressive. :D
everyday I wonder
I wonder all the time
I wonder why people complain about there weight but do nothing about it, I wonder why people complain about whats going on but do nothing to make any type of change
Great poem !
I'm sobbing right now, thanks for the poem!
A beautiful poem.sad but beautiful
nice one i liked it :)
But like any other umbrella, you'll get wet either way because it can't protect you fully so then you just say "screw it" and throw the umbrella away and get drenched in the sweet rain from above!
what a poem, mate? That touch to sky...
Nice poem :D
That was pretty amazing!
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