Through my eyes no one knows
What I see, what comes and goes
You cast your world before my eyes
Filled with hate and dirty lies
You’ve made a path that I must follow
Full of pain and so much sorrow
Why must I pay for your mistakes?
You’ve thrown me out and locked the gates
15 wonders:
The craftsmanship in that gate is immense.
This is beautiful. :)
I love that shadow cast by the gate.
Also that poem is beautiful.
that's pretty cool, haha
Old gate... modern building behind there in the background :D
deep dude... deep...
i write poems too. but i love yours mcuh better =d
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Great writing and great pic!
Your poems are good, you should do some more.
The picture is nice but the poem is even better (:
Deep mate!
I think the artwork of this door is really nice. Imagine that as an entry of a beautiful green garden. Maybe with new colour.
nice man :), great piece
That was beautiful. Great post + Followed!
The image grabbed my attention, but the words left me feeling.
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