Wonder #1

Aug

wondered by Joana Galhardo Tags photos, wonders

These hopes are filled with spite

Desired killed and raped light

It seems these things are so scary

Are way too much for a heart to carry

So every night I sit and wonder

What's left for me to ponder

You've just ripped through my soul

Leaving nothing behind but a huge gaping hole

So these deep thoughts are all I've left

Knowing that I've been living a theft.

Diego Sousa said...: that was kinda fine, but, i would like to read some PORTUGUESE poetry =); 13 August 2011 at 02:11
Uberbyron said...: I really like this actually :) Make sure to correct the "behing" typo.; 13 August 2011 at 17:12
Joana Galhardo said...: oh thank you ;); 13 August 2011 at 17:37
|sªMª®µ said...: nice ;D; 13 August 2011 at 21:42
Ana Teixeira said...: Good :D; 14 August 2011 at 17:36
Nero said...: ive just read this a few times, it's deep. did you write it?; 14 August 2011 at 17:38
Joana Galhardo said...: i did; 14 August 2011 at 17:55

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